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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Is it grammatically correct?

My ID card has been damaged through general wear and tear. Therefore, I request that you issue a new ID card at the earliest, I have recently changed my name back to my maiden name. so I am requesing you to issue the new ID card with change of name reflecting.

  

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It is perfectly understandable, but there are problems, among them a comma splice and an unexpected period. I would change it thus: My ID card has been damaged through general wear and tear. I request that you issue me a new ID card at your earliest convenience.

  • It is perfectly understandable, but there are problems, among them a comma splice and an unexpected period.
  • I would change it thus: My ID card has been damaged through general wear and tear.
  • I request that you issue me a new ID card at your earliest convenience.
  • I have recently changed my name back to my maiden name, so please issue the new ID card in that name, _________.
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It is perfectly understandable, but there are problems, among them a comma splice and an unexpected period. I would change it thus:

My ID card has been damaged through general wear and tear. I request that you issue me a new ID card at your earliest convenience. I have recently changed my name back to my maiden name, so please issue the new ID card

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anonymous

My ID card has been damaged through general wear and tear. Therefore, I request that you issue a new ID card at the earliest, I have recently changed my name back to my maiden name. so I am requesing you to issue the new ID card with change of name reflecting .[reflecting this change of name]

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