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The bookshop has replaced the damaged books, but they don't look 100% clear copy. All the available copies with them are same, so they have given better copies from the available stocks

CalifJim · Accepted Answer

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The bookshop has replaced the damaged books, but they don't look 100% clear copy. All the available copies with them are the same, so they have been given better copies from the available stocks.

The grammar is good as corrected above in red. However, there is some room for improvement with regard to the composition as a whole.

"the ... copies with them" is not a good choice of words. Maybe "All the available copies there" or "All the copies they have".

"100% clear copy" is not a good choice of words. I'm not sure what you mean. It seems that the replacements are not damaged, but they're not good in some way either. It's unclear.

"given better copies from stock" seems a better way to end. If they were given these copies, then of course the copies were available. There's no need to call attention to that.

In general your story does not hang together coherently. The books were damaged. Then they were replaced. The replacements weren't good either. But still they were better copies from stock. It seems the story keeps changing. The books were not so good, but the books were better. It's hard to follow. You might need more details to explain more exactly what happened.

CJ

Anonymous · Answer

Thank you once again.

The most of the copies in stock were found damaged. Shall I write as follows.

The bookshop has replaced the damaged books, but they don't look a new copy but they look better than what they previously supplied. All the available copies (in stock) were mostly in the same condition.

Thank you very much for your kind help and support.

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