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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Upon inspection, the cold room panels were found to be damaged; the foam cells in cut edges and corner were found damaged, but they informed that they would take care about this while installing the unit by applying foam spray.

  

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Too verbose! The cold room panels and the foam cells at the cut edges and corner were damaged, but they said they would take care of this with foam spray while installing the unit.

  • Too verbose!
  • The cold room panels and the foam cells at the cut edges and corner were damaged, but they said they would take care of this with foam spray while installing the unit.
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Too verbose!

The cold room panels and the foam cells at the cut edges and corner were damaged, but they said they would take care of this with foam spray while installing the unit.

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