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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is it grammatically correct?
As for the invoice # DVC451225, which has been shipped from Hong Kong under AWB. 160 XXXX XXXX, not from Marseille. Below are the package details from the supplier forwarded by Mr. Alex last week which is self explanatory.
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160 XXXX XXXX, not from Marseille. Information from the supplier about the package was forwarded to you last week by Mr. Alex and is also given below.
- 160 XXXX XXXX, not from Marseille.
- Information from the supplier about the package was forwarded to you last week by Mr.
- Alex and is also given below.
- The details should be self-explanatory.
- Note that I added "the package was shipped" because it was not, as the wording suggests, the invoice that was shipped.
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I would say it like this:
As for invoice # DVC451225, the package was shipped from Hong Kong under AWB.160 XXXX XXXX, not from Marseille. Information from the supplier about the package was forwarded to you last week by Mr. Alex and is also given below. The details should be self-explanatory.
Note that I added "the package was shipped" because it was not, as the wording
As for invoice # DVC451225, the package was shipped from Hong Kong under AWB.160 XXXX XXXX, not from Marseille. Information from the supplier about the package was forwarded to you last week by Mr. Alex and is also given below. The details should be self-explanatory.
Note that I added "the package was shipped" because it was not, as the wording
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AnonymousMr. AlexThis is odd. "Mr" is not normally used with first names only. It is used with surnames like Mr Jones or, full names like Mr Alex Jones.
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