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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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It has been reported that the sweeper machine delivered was found not working properly. We need to do two or more repeats of ride on rubbish only then can we clear the area properly. The single ride does not make the rubbish area clean properly, it always leaves debris remains on the floor
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You are using too many words. Try to brief and to the point when you write: The sweeping machine does not work properly. We need to ride repeatedly over the rubbish in order to clean the area properly.
- You are using too many words.
- Try to brief and to the point when you write: The sweeping machine does not work properly.
- We need to ride repeatedly over the rubbish in order to clean the area properly.
- A single ride always leaves debris on the floor.
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You are using too many words. Try to brief and to the point when you write:
The sweeping machine does not work properly. We need to ride repeatedly over the rubbish in order to clean the area properly. A single ride always leaves debris on the floor.
The sweeping machine does not work properly. We need to ride repeatedly over the rubbish in order to clean the area properly. A single ride always leaves debris on the floor.
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