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Hi,Here is my own writing. Is it grammatically and figuratively right?The aim of this research is to define the history of comedy emergence, to analyze its types, philosophers’ and thinkers’ point of view around comedy, the directing methods of comedy and the performing method of Dario Fo. In the first chapter, the research generalities will be brought in the introduction section. In the second chapter, the history of comedy emergence and thinkers’ ideas will be analyzed thoroughly. The third chapter contains an explanation on comedy description, its different types, the philosophers’ ideas on comedy, comedy directing styles and Fo’s performing method. In the fourth chapter, the providing contents will be concluded. Regards,Nesa

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

I don't have time to discuss this in detail, but here are a couple of quick comments.

You list everything, and then list it again in very similar words. Seems repetitive.

Does a research report have 'chapters'? Or is it eg 'sections'?

Clive

Enoon · Answer

nesaHere is my own writing. Is it grammatically and figuratively right?

Not too bad, but it needs work, I'm afraid.

I don't know what "comedy emergence" means. You cram too much into the list in the first sentence. Break each thing out and treat it separately in a sentence of its own.

I don't know what "research generalities" are, but they can't be "brought in" a section. If you mean that the first chapter is an introduction, you should call the first chapter "Introduction" instead. The elements of a list, even only two, must be of the same kind, so it should be "history of X" and "ideas of Y".

"Explanation on comedy description" is unidiomatic to the point I don't know what it means.

I don't know what "providing contents" are.

Is it grammatically and figuratively right?

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