Is it good to give up sometimes?

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In the process of reaching goal, there are many problems which force you to give up. Some people are of the opinion that sometimes we are well advised to stop working hard while others are taking issue with them. From their point of view, people shouldn't cease trying because this will be the justification of being weak. There are some factors including self-confidence,talents,abilities and family helps.

If you have self-confidence, you will comprehend that it is very important. For a decent life, we are obliged to try constantly. When you are very sensitive to what people think about you, you can't make your way up to the top. Self-confidence is the indication that you follow your line of thought and even be a tough act to follow, therefore people follow your footsteps to be successful.

Your talents and abilities are the keys to success. If somebody tries hard but he does not use his talents and abilities is similar to a bird which goes mountain climbing with it's wings! For finding out our abilities and talents, we should have good knowledge of how we should we shoot to success. Unless we don't know the way of succeeding against all odds, we try to lift the budren from our shoulders.

As we get nearer to appropriate result, the situations get harder which cause people not to be able to continue, while other group of people keep trying and push aside all the difficulties with their family and friends. In situations which people can not solve their problems solely, a person who doesn't have any good friends and family or doesn't have good relationship with them is loser before he wants to face with his problems.

To sum up, it appears to me that some parameters play effective and crucial role in encountering with difficult conditions. If we don't pursue the rules or accept the terms, we won't be able to manage keep our works moving forward, these factors are talents,knowledge,self-confidence and family help. At first you be confident enough and not to give up going forward. At the same time we must use our talents and improve them, because as we mentioned before it will make the work better and the way shorter, so it is essential to discover our talents and then change it to ability. while we are following these footsteps, it is better to ask for help from our friends or families. We must put all them to work because peril lays ahead of us and if we don't consider it as danger we will stop trying soon, therefore the people who claimed that we should give up, don't know the way to success.