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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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It is a unsual, brand-new bag. This is in a shape of rectangular. All the bag is multicoloured with a lovely addition(zips, handles and shoulder strap and side pockets).

A bag was made in Italy. It is ideal for traveller.
  

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It is a (article) unsual, brand-new (strange ordering) bag. ). All the bag is multicoloured with a lovely addition ( only one???

  • It is a (article) unsual, brand-new (strange ordering) bag.
  • ).
  • All the bag is multicoloured with a lovely addition ( only one???
  • zips, handles and shoulder strap and side pockets).
  • A bag was made in Italy.
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It is a (article) unsual, brand-new (strange ordering) bag. This is in a shape of rectangular (why can't this be in the first sentence?). All the bag is multicoloured with a lovely addition (only one??? zips, handles and shoulder strap and side pockets).

A bag was made in Italy. It is ideal for traveller. (one traveller?)

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