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Kouroshh Posted 11 years ago
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Is it correct to write this part in my motivation letter
In addition, I always thought of Germany as a great destination to pursue my PhD studies. Based on my experience, chemistry is traditionally taught at an advanced level in German universities. I strongly believe that doing my PhD in university of Aachen would give me a chance to put into practice all those skills I already acquired throughout my previous research years career.
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I'd use the present perfect in some places, and the last few words are a bit messed up. In addition, I have always thought of Germany as a great destination to pursue my PhD studies. Based on my experience, chemistry is traditionally taught at an advanced level in German universities.
- I'd use the present perfect in some places, and the last few words are a bit messed up.
- In addition, I have always thought of Germany as a great destination to pursue my PhD studies.
- Based on my experience, chemistry is traditionally taught at an advanced level in German universities.
- I strongly believe that doing my PhD at the U niversity of Aachen would give me a chance to put into practice all those skills I have already acquired in previous research (during my career of many years).
- The parenthetical part is optional.
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I'd use the present perfect in some places, and the last few words are a bit messed up.
In addition, I have always thought of Germany as a great destination to pursue my PhD studies. Based on my experience, chemistry is traditionally taught at an advanced level in German universities. I strongly believe that doing my PhD at the University of Aachen would give me a cha
In addition, I have always thought of Germany as a great destination to pursue my PhD studies. Based on my experience, chemistry is traditionally taught at an advanced level in German universities. I strongly believe that doing my PhD at the University of Aachen would give me a cha
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Thank you for your great help dear CalifJim. Can I kindly also ask what do you think about this part.
I have become very interested in applying for this position because it requires detailed understanding of both organic chemistry and biochemistry. During my bachelor and master program, I mainly focused on organic chemistry and biochemistry subjects and I gained a deeper understanding in
I have become very interested in applying for this position because it requires detailed understanding of both organic chemistry and biochemistry. During my bachelor and master program, I mainly focused on organic chemistry and biochemistry subjects and I gained a deeper understanding in
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Dear CalifJim, do you think the previous message was fine or I need to change some parts? Thank you in advance.
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kouroshhCan I kindly also askI have become very interested in applying for this position because it requires detailed understanding of both organic chemistry and biochemistry. During my bachelor's and master's program, I
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Thank you very much dear CalifJim for your comments. Sure, I will definitely post it in a separate thread for the next time. I really appreciate your help.
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