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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is it correct? Presonal Profile in CV

Hi,

I am preparing CV in English. Below is my Personal Profile.
Could you please tell me if these are correct?

Enthusiastic and professional IT Expert with 6 years of experience working for large multi-national organizations, credit card corporations and banking institutions. Solid background in information and technology and management supported by certificates such as MCSA, MCSA Messaging, ITILv3 Foundation, PRINCE2 Foundation & Practitioner.

Thanks,
Karol
  

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Hi, I am writing CV in English. Could you please tell me if these are correct? Enthusiastic and professional IT Expert with 6 years of experience working for large multi-national organizations, credit card corporations and banking institutions.

— Mr Karol

  • Hi, I am writing CV in English.
  • Could you please tell me if these are correct?
  • Enthusiastic and professional IT Expert with 6 years of experience working for large multi-national organizations, credit card corporations and banking institutions.
  • Solid background in information and technology and management supported by certificates such as MCSA, MCSA Messaging, ITILv3 Foundation, PRINCE2 Foundation & Practitioner.
  • Thanks, Karol
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Hi,

I am writing CV in English.
Could you please tell me if these are correct?

Enthusiastic and professional IT Expert with 6 years of experience working for large multi-national organizations, credit card corporations and banking institutions. Solid background in information and technology and management supported by certificates such as MCSA, MCSA Messaging, ITILv3 Founda
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can I write: "Solid background... supported by certificates such as..."
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Yes, you can. I'm not up-to-date on these matters, so I don't know if your format is correct of not. That is, should the points be made in a different fashion, such as "bullet" items? (Good luck, and welcome to the Forums!)
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"Information technology" is a thing you might have a background in. "Information" by itself isn't, and "technology" is too broad. Presumably your experience as a manager is in IT. "Management supported by" may derail your reader into at first thinking that it's the management that's supported when it's your experience that is.

I would say something like "Solid background in information
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You are not writing in sentences, so it sounds very abrupt and choppy.

I am an enthusiastic and professional IT Expert with 6 years of experience working for large multi-national organizations —credit card corporations and banking institutions. I have a solid background in information and technology with
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