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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is it correct? (it's a part of a formal letter)

I ask You to consider the possibility of holding this Festival in Your hospitable country with Your kind support.
  

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Anonymous I ask You to consider the possibility of holding this Festival in Your hospitable country with Your kind support. It's rather effusive. I would modify it a little.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous I ask You to consider the possibility of holding this Festival in Your hospitable country with Your kind support.
  • It's rather effusive.
  • I would modify it a little.
  • I ask you to consider supporting us by holding this festival in your country.
  • Other forum members may have other suggestions.
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Anonymous I ask You to consider the possibility of holding this Festival in Your hospitable country with Your kind support.
It's rather effusive. I would modify it a little.

I ask you to consider supporting us by holding this festival in your country.

Other forum members may have other suggestions.

CJ
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