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Alexandremelo Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Is it correct ? I need some feedbackl

I thought that tourism benefited the countries concerned

change ---- I was under the impression that tourism was good for the countries concerned. (is it correct?)

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the manufacturer is planning to try out the new product soon
trial --- The new product is planned to be on trial soon
will be on trial soon ???

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There is usually someone around to sort out problemas on a package holiday.
hand --- On a package there is usually someone on hand do deal with problems
around to hand with problems ???

thanks a lot
alexandre
  

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alexandremelo I thought that tourism benefited the countries concerned. I was under the impression that tourism was good for the countries concerned. OK.

— CalifJim

  • alexandremelo I thought that tourism benefited the countries concerned.
  • I was under the impression that tourism was good for the countries concerned.
  • OK.
  • alexandremelo the manufacturer is planning to try out the new product soon trial --- The new product is planned to be on trial soon will be on trial soon ???
  • It's not clear to me that you need to put this in the passive voice.
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alexandremelo I thought that tourism benefited the countries concerned.

... I was under the impression that tourism was good for the countries concerned.
OK.
alexandremelothe manufacturer is planning to try out the new product soon
trial --- The new product is planned to be on trial soon
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thanks . actually the exercise asks to rewrite the sentences using the words : trial and good
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