Is it correct? Cover letter

Can anyone help me change this a bit? because I just found this example on the internet and I have changed few words only. I totaly have no idea how to write this:/

Dear Mr. /Ms. ***
I am writing to you regarding possible employment opportunities within your firm. I am confident that my academic background and experience will provide those characteristics deemed necessary to successfully contribute to your company.

As my resume outlines, I have completed my Bachelor's Degree in Architectural Technology at the University of Brighton. Within this area of academia, I have maintained a strong academic record while acquiring those skills necessary for a successful employment opportunity. To be sure, I have well developed drafting and designing skills, the ability to organize and produce information, and the confidence to express and contribute new ideas.

I would welcome the opportunity to meet with you personally to discuss any future employment needs you may recognize within your company. Please find my attached CV, which provides full details of my qualification. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration and I will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,