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TreeView Posted 14 years ago

is it correct and possible to understand

Time has stopped. I'm falling down
I see the darkness all around.
I made a horrible mistake,
I threw my happiness away.

Hell splits up my feeble soul.
My flesh and bones have been dissolved,
I feel the hopelessness inside,
I'm scared, but nowhere to hide
  

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It has a couple of nice images. I understand that you made a big mistake for which you are contrite. It does not have consistent rhyme or meter.

— Mister Micawber

  • It has a couple of nice images.
  • I understand that you made a big mistake for which you are contrite.
  • It does not have consistent rhyme or meter.
  • I have fixed the punctuation and meter below: Time has stopped.
  • I'm falling down.
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It has a couple of nice images. I understand that you made a big mistake for which you are contrite. It does not have consistent rhyme or meter. I have fixed the punctuation and meter below:

Time has stopped. I'm falling down.
I see the darkness all around.
I made a horrible mistake—
I threw my happiness away.

Now **** splits up my feeble soul;
My
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Thanks you very much!
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