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"The described company is involved with variuos modes of transportation, such as: road, intermodal, sea and air transport, as well as logistics of fresh products. An important aspect in terms of the research, presented below, is that the company also deals with storage. The thesis compares the options for choosing the acquisition of a forklift fleet used for the needs of a cross-docking warehouse".
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It contains very unnatural and awkward phrases as well as spelling errors.
- It contains very unnatural and awkward phrases as well as spelling errors.
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It contains very unnatural and awkward phrases as well as spelling errors.
0Thank You!
I know, I know...
just trying to translate the sentences, but I have no clue about the forklifts, cross-docking, etc...
could You tell me please, how can I change it?
0Ok. Thank You!
Could You help me a bit and give some advice how to correct the awkward phrases?
I have no a clue. Never heard of cross docking, etc...
0Have you tried Google Translate yet?
It won't be perfect, but it may help you to get started.
(I don't know what a cross-docking warehouse is either, by the way.)
CJ
0I have no clue from that description if this is a company that is in the business of providing shipping services to other companies, or does both manufacturing and shipping. I have paraphrased the paragraph into more natural English.
The company [used as a model] / [described] in this study [employs ]/ [supplies] various modes of (bulk) g
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