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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Wow that is a great idea I'd love to join you , but I have a softball tournament that day .

  

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Much of this, including the highlighted words, is OK, but there are one or two problems. It is a run-on sentence. The easiest way to fix this is to split into two sentences.

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  • Much of this, including the highlighted words, is OK, but there are one or two problems.
  • It is a run-on sentence.
  • The easiest way to fix this is to split into two sentences.
  • Can you see where to split it?
  • There are also two spacing errors.
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Much of this, including the highlighted words, is OK, but there are one or two problems. It is a run-on sentence. The easiest way to fix this is to split into two sentences. Can you see where to split it? There are also two spacing errors. A comma after "Wow" would be beneficial.

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