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Grammar

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When she finished the food , she called us to eat , after I finished the food , I participated in the contest and won ..

  

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It's unclear whether you are using "finished the food" to mean "finished preparing the food" or "finished eating". Also, you seem to be stringing together a series of clauses separated by commas without really making a fully coherent sentence. And please do not leave a space before commas or periods.

  • It's unclear whether you are using "finished the food" to mean "finished preparing the food" or "finished eating".
  • Also, you seem to be stringing together a series of clauses separated by commas without really making a fully coherent sentence.
  • And please do not leave a space before commas or periods.
  • Try your sentence again if you wish, and we can check it again.
  • CJ
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It's unclear whether you are using "finished the food" to mean "finished preparing the food" or "finished eating".

Also, you seem to be stringing together a series of clauses separated by commas without really making a fully coherent sentence.

And please do not leave a space before commas or periods.

Try your sentence again if you wish, and we can check it again.

CJ

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