Is it correct?
Hi. Is the following e-mail correct? Thank you in advance.
Good afternoon,
The attached file is the first attempt to writing the first section. We would appreciate having your opinion about it. We would also like to request for the document of MLA citation, if that possible. Thank you in advance for your response.Best regards,Top answer
First, of all there should be a period after "afternoon," not a comma. And there is no need to to start a new paragraph after that. I've inserted these and other corrections in the following version of your e-mail, putting textual changes in boldface underlined .
- First, of all there should be a period after "afternoon," not a comma.
- And there is no need to to start a new paragraph after that.
- I've inserted these and other corrections in the following version of your e-mail, putting textual changes in boldface underlined .
- I'm not 100% sure that I've correctly understood what you mean by "the document of MLA citation," so have offered two versions of that.
- Good afternoon.
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First, of all there should be a period after "afternoon," not a comma. And there is no need to to start a new paragraph after that. I've inserted these and other corrections in the following version of your e-mail, putting textual changes in boldface underlined. I'm not 100% sure that I've correctly understood what you mean by "the document of MLA citation," so have offered two v
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