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Kunsusuki Posted 9 years ago
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Hi. This is an e-mail for my training supervisor, is it accurate in terms of grammar and syntax? Thank you in advance.
Good afternoon,
This is Lakki, Boura,and Zou members of the training group in Khaz High Scool. We would like to inform you that the scheduled session of observation for today was cancelled due to the total absence of pupils of third year classes. We would like to clarify for the reasons of the delayed delivery of the observation report. The first session of training was held in exam periods while the second session coincided with Mouled Nabaoui and the third one during Winter vacation was cancelled because of student's strike for prolonged off days. We are doing our best to coordinate a session for the observation in the coming days.
Best regards
  

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Good afternoon, This is Lakki, Bour a, a nd Zo u; we are members of the training group in Khaz High Scool. We would like to inform you that the scheduled session of observation scheduled for today was cancelled due to the total absence of pupils of from third yea r. classes.

  • Good afternoon, This is Lakki, Bour a, a nd Zo u; we are members of the training group in Khaz High Scool.
  • We would like to inform you that the scheduled session of observation scheduled for today was cancelled due to the total absence of pupils of from third yea r.
  • classes.
  • We would also like to clarify for the reasons of for the delayed delivery of the observation report.
  • The first session of training was held in during the exam perio d , while the second session coincided with the Mouled Nabaoui festival, and the third one during the winter vacation was cancelled because of a stude nt strike for about extended holidays.
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Good afternoon,

This is Lakki, Boura, and Zou; we are members of the training group in Khaz High Scool. We would like to inform you that the scheduled session of observation scheduled for today was cancelled due to the total absence of pupils of from third year. classes. We would also like to clarify for the reaso

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