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Kunsusuki Posted 10 years ago
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Is it correct?

Hi. Is the following sentence correct? Thank you in advance.
The focus of this study is to describe how Virginia Woolf made use of the two fictional characters ‘Septimus Warren Smith’ and ‘Clarissa Dalloway’ to criticize the life style and the devaluing morality of the British governing class in the post First World War.
  

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kunsusuki British governing class in the post-First World War era . This is the part I would rewrite. At minimum, add 'era', but here's my version: The focus of this study is to describe how Virginia Woolf made use of two fictional characters, Septimus Warren Smith and Clarissa Dalloway, to criticize the life style and the devaluing morality of the governing class in post-World War I Britain.

  • kunsusuki British governing class in the post-First World War era .
  • This is the part I would rewrite.
  • At minimum, add 'era', but here's my version: The focus of this study is to describe how Virginia Woolf made use of two fictional characters, Septimus Warren Smith and Clarissa Dalloway, to criticize the life style and the devaluing morality of the governing class in post-World War I Britain.
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kunsusukiBritish governing class in the post-First World War era.
This is the part I would rewrite. At minimum, add 'era', but here's my version:

The focus of this study is to describe how Virginia Woolf made use of two fictional characters, Septimus Warren Smith and Clarissa Dalloway, to criticize the life style a

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