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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is it correct?

As for the installation of carpet by our team, please find below the details of measurement taken room by room to order the carpets accordingly.
  

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No. It's too verbose, and it is not clear who is to order the carpets. I suggest eg Here are the measurements taken room by room by our carpet installation team.

— Clive

  • No.
  • It's too verbose, and it is not clear who is to order the carpets.
  • I suggest eg Here are the measurements taken room by room by our carpet installation team.
  • Please order the carpets accordingly.
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No. It's too verbose, and it is not clear who is to order the carpets.

I suggest eg Here are the measurements taken room by room by our carpet installation team. Please order the carpets accordingly.
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