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Kunsusuki Posted 10 years ago
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Is it correct?
Hi.
Is the below sentence correct? Thank you in advance.
Didn’t Europe feel, till now, remorsful for what it did for Africa throughout its long decades of colonialism that contributed in seeding regression which the new African generation harvests, and which became a chronique desease that it suffers from in all its aspects of life ?
Is the below sentence correct? Thank you in advance.
Didn’t Europe feel, till now, remorsful for what it did for Africa throughout its long decades of colonialism that contributed in seeding regression which the new African generation harvests, and which became a chronique desease that it suffers from in all its aspects of life ?
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kunsusuki Is the below sentence correct? No. It is too long and convoluted.
- kunsusuki Is the below sentence correct?
- No.
- It is too long and convoluted.
- Start by breaking it into 2 sentences.
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kunsusukiIs the below sentence correct?No. It is too long and convoluted. Start by breaking it into 2 sentences.
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Would it be better this way;
Didn’t Europe feel, till now, remorsful for what it did for Africa throughout its long decades of colonialism? Didn't it feel regretful for seeding regression that the new African generation harvests, and suffers from in all its aspects of life ?
Didn’t Europe feel, till now, remorsful for what it did for Africa throughout its long decades of colonialism? Didn't it feel regretful for seeding regression that the new African generation harvests, and suffers from in all its aspects of life ?
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The whole tone seems odd, kunsusuki, and I am not sure of your intention with that style. This is what I would expect...if I understand your intent:
Has Europe finally felt remorse for its long, repressive colonialism in Africa, from which the current generation of Africans continues to suffer?
Has Europe finally felt remorse for its long, repressive colonialism in Africa, from which the current generation of Africans continues to suffer?
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