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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is it correct?

I would like to request a leave for 4 days, to accompany my kids to travel back to my home town as I was not able to manage alone here.

I look forward to your approval
  

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That doesn't make much sense. Do you want to accompany the kids or to go back with them to your hometown?

— Teechr

  • That doesn't make much sense.
  • Do you want to accompany the kids or to go back with them to your hometown?
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That doesn't make much sense. Do you want to accompany the kids or to go back with them to your hometown?
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Thank you for helping me to correct my sentences.

I need to send them back to our hometown. Since they are 4 years old, I need to accompany them.

Thank you for your help
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Anonymousas I was not able to manage alone here.
Then what does this bit mean?
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Once again, thank you for your help.

Presently, they are with me here at my workplace, so I need to send them back to our hometown where my family can take care them better than here So, shall I write as follows.

Since very tight work schedule and my children are very young age, I am planning to send them back to my hometown where they can get better care than here, so I would l
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Dear [],

I have found it very difficult to look after my children because of their very young age and also because of my tight work schedule. Therefore, I have decided to send them to my hometown to be looked after by my family there.

I kindly request that I be granted four day's leave to take my children back to my hometown.

Thank you for your k
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You're welcome, and I wish you all the best. Emotion: smile
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