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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Please confirm with the site manager whether the above work is completed or not because it was a temporary solution that we repaired the water leak with the applying of silicone sealant at the site request.
  

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Anonymous Please confirm with the site manager whether the above work is completed or not because it was a temporary solution that we repaired the water leak with the applying of silicone sealant at the site request. Please confirm with the site manager that the work referenced above is completed. As a temporary solution, we repaired the water leak by applying silicone sealant at the site as requested.

  • Anonymous Please confirm with the site manager whether the above work is completed or not because it was a temporary solution that we repaired the water leak with the applying of silicone sealant at the site request.
  • Please confirm with the site manager that the work referenced above is completed.
  • As a temporary solution, we repaired the water leak by applying silicone sealant at the site as requested.
  • I don't sense there is any 'because' relationship here, so I took it out.
  • I'm also puzzled by the mention that it's temporary.
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AnonymousPlease confirm with the site manager whether the above work is completed or not because it was a temporary solution that we repaired the water leak with the applying of silicone sealant at the site request.
Please confirm with the site manager that the work referenced above is completed. As a temporary solution, we repaired the water leak by apply

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