Is this passage correct?Thank you in advance. The scenario of laying for hours in front of the television might be seen in each house around the world. This long exposition to this device raises its impact on humans’life. Movies for instance, might not be entertaining as they could be. Some scenes influence one’s mind thus his behaviour. Through movies, one’s behaviour can easily be affected.
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laying - lying exposition - exposure humans' lives as entertaining as... thus his one's These are strictly grammatical corrections.