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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Please find enclosed the attendance sheet for the staff who attended the seminar conducted by us
  

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I'd say, Please find enclosed the attendance sheet for the staff who attended our seminar.

  • I'd say, Please find enclosed the attendance sheet for the staff who attended our seminar.
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I'd say, Please find enclosed the attendance sheet for the staff who attended our seminar.Emotion: wink
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I suggest: Enclosed is the attendance sheet for the staff who attended our seminar.
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Generally speaking, native speakers try to avoid repeating similar words, eg attendance/attended.

eg Please find enclosed the attendance sheet for the staff who came to our seminar.

eg Here is the attendance sheet for the staff who came to our seminar.

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