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SHD Posted 14 years ago
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I am planning to take out 6 days from my balance leave enitlement for a short vacation which starts from [date] and till [date].

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SHD I am planning to take out 6 days from my balance leave enitlement for a short vacation which starts from [date] and till [date]. Do you really need to include so much information? Assuming my employer understands how leave entitlement works, I would just write this: I'm planning to take six days vacation from [date] through [date].

— CalifJim

  • SHD I am planning to take out 6 days from my balance leave enitlement for a short vacation which starts from [date] and till [date].
  • Do you really need to include so much information?
  • Assuming my employer understands how leave entitlement works, I would just write this: I'm planning to take six days vacation from [date] through [date].
  • CJ
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SHDI am planning to take out 6 days from my balance leave enitlement for a short vacation which starts from [date] and till [date].
Do you really need to include so much information? Assuming my employer understands how leave entitlement works, I would just write this:

I'm planning to take six days vacation from [date] through [date].
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