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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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First of all, the price which you got from Mr. PX for our department work is not acceptable to us
  

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First of all, the quote you received from Mr. PX for our department work is not acceptable to us. It is right as corrected, but it is quite rude, and I suggest that you re-word it significantly if you wish to keep the customer.

— Mister Micawber

  • First of all, the quote you received from Mr.
  • PX for our department work is not acceptable to us.
  • It is right as corrected, but it is quite rude, and I suggest that you re-word it significantly if you wish to keep the customer.
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First of all, the quote you received from Mr. PX for our department work is not acceptable to us.

It is right as corrected, but it is quite rude, and I suggest that you re-word it significantly if you wish to keep the customer.
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Thank you for your help

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I must first mention that the quote you received from Mr. PX for our department work was only provisional / only an estimate.
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