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Seth92 Posted 15 years ago
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Well, tomorrow I've an oral, about my style, can you check my production please?

Starting from the assumption that I don't care about what fashion says, because I like wearing

clothes that suit me and not the ones imposed my fashon.

My everyday suit is a simple pair of jeans with a plain t-shirt and the sneakers are the shoes that I

prefer.

When I need to buy clothes, I don't care about the material, it can be silk wallen or cotton, it makes no difference, but the problem is when I come back home and my mother sees what I've bought, she immediatly realizes if the material is good or not, in fact she often gets angry.

The winter is the season that I hate most, because we have to wear the vest, the sweatshirt, the coat and I can't stand having on too many things.

When the weather is unpredictable, I always try to wear the right thing, nevertheless I'm always wrong!

Therefore in those situations I've decided to dress like an onion, in layers, to solve the problem.

I like changing the way of dressing thus I don't have a particular style.

I usually dress inblack or gray, and when I go out in the evening I often wear either the shirt or the waistcoat with a t-shirt below!
  

Top answer

Hi Seth; I've made some suggestions. Regards, A- s Starting from the assumption that I don't care about what fashion says, because I like wearing clothes that suit me and not the ones imposed my fashon. (This is not a sentence.

  • Hi Seth; I've made some suggestions.
  • Regards, A- s Starting from the assumption that I don't care about what fashion says, because I like wearing clothes that suit me and not the ones imposed my fashon.
  • (This is not a sentence.
  • ) My everyday suit is a simple pair of jeans with a plain t-shirt and the sneakers are the shoes that I prefer.
  • When I need to buy clothes, I don't care about the material, it can be silk , wallen or cotton, it makes no difference, but the problem is when I come back home and my mother sees what I've bought, she immediatly realizes whether if the material is good or not, in fact , she often gets angry.
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3 Answers
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Hi Seth;
I've made some suggestions.
Regards, A-Emotion: stars


Starting from the assumption that I don't care about what
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Thank you! The oral's gone quite well!
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Congratulations! You must have prepared very well.
A-Emotion: stars

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