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Rsharma Posted 15 years ago
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Sir, I need to spend some time with you to discuss about my possessional approach towards the work have been given. Kindly allocate 10-15 mins for me whenever you are free.
  

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rsharma Sir, I need to spend some time with you to discuss about my possessional approach towards the work have been given. Kindly allocate 10-15 mins for me whenever you are free. discuss something -- not "discuss about" something possessional approach -- sorry, but I have no idea what this means the work have been given -- the work I/we have been given

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  • rsharma Sir, I need to spend some time with you to discuss about my possessional approach towards the work have been given.
  • Kindly allocate 10-15 mins for me whenever you are free.
  • discuss something -- not "discuss about" something possessional approach -- sorry, but I have no idea what this means the work have been given -- the work I/we have been given
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rsharmaSir, I need to spend some time with you to discuss about my possessional approach towards the work have been given. Kindly allocate 10-15 mins for me whenever you are free.
discuss something -- not "discuss about" something
possessional approach -- sorry, but I have no idea what this means
the work have been given -- the work I/we have been
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Thanks, What about this ?

Sir, I need to spend some time with you to discuss about my professional approach towards the work i have been given. Kindly allocate 10-15 mins for me whenever you are free
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Just get rid of the "about" and capitalize the second "i".
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Hi Sharma,
Sir, I would like to spend some time with you to discuss my professional approach towards the task assigned to me. Please allocate 10-15 minutes time at your convenience.

Regards,
vsrao
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