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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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As per Mr. Henry's instructions, items which were purchased from M/S XY stores last week have been returned to the stores due to not fit to the site except those two tables.
  

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Anonymous As per Mr. Henry's instructions, items which were purchased from M/S XY stores last week have been returned to the stores due to not fit to the site except those two tables. This would be better phrased like this: .

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  • Henry's instructions, items which were purchased from M/S XY stores last week have been returned to the stores due to not fit to the site except those two tables.
  • This would be better phrased like this: .
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  • items which were purchased .
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AnonymousAs per Mr. Henry's instructions, items which were purchased from M/S XY stores last week have been returned to the stores due to not fit to the site except those two tables.

This would be better phrased like this:

. . . items which were purchased . . . have been returned to the stores because they do not fit the site, however, those two
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