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Lisicong Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Local and department authority without control of higher-ups and supervise of general public, at the same time, there is no containing power to control them.
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Hi, Local and department authority without control of higher-ups and supervise of general public, at the same time, there is no containing power to control them. This seems like two sentences run together. Should 'at' start a new sentence?
- Hi, Local and department authority without control of higher-ups and supervise of general public, at the same time, there is no containing power to control them.
- This seems like two sentences run together.
- Should 'at' start a new sentence?
- I think so.
- The first part does not have a good sentence structure.
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Hi,
Local and department authority without control of higher-ups and supervise of general public, at the same time, there is no containing power to control them.
This seems like two sentences run together. Should 'at' start a new sentence? I think so.
The first part does not have a good sentence structure. What's the subject? Where's the verb?
Local and department authority without control of higher-ups and supervise of general public, at the same time, there is no containing power to control them.
This seems like two sentences run together. Should 'at' start a new sentence? I think so.
The first part does not have a good sentence structure. What's the subject? Where's the verb?
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