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00Decision-making is common processes in companies. Every manager has to announce new decisions in order to achieve company [objectives/goals]. Actually, to achieve the [objectives/goals], managers need supports or evidences to [assist/help] them make better decisions. Turban (2007) says, Business Intelligence (BI) collects and analyses historical data to generate models or reports in order to [assist/help] decision makers to decide appropriate decisions. Therefore, Yates says “01i00…The quality of those decisions can be no better than the quality of the judgments supporting them02i00”. This essay will evaluate the benefits of BI for decision-making process in terms to [enhance/improve] the decision-making process, provide appropriate models to make better decisions and forecasting.0-