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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Is it correct?

0Apart from the promotion of music education from the American government, the Music Educators National Conference (MENC) played a vital role in it.02br
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0 No. I don't think that works very well. 02i 02br 02br 00 CJ0-

— CalifJim

  • 0 No.
  • I don't think that works very well.
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0 No. I don't think that works very well. You may be trying to say too many things in one sentence, but if you must say all that in one sentence, let me suggest the following.02br
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01i00The Music Educators National Conference (MENC) played a vital role in the American government's promotion of music education.02i02br
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