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MyShirley Posted 20 years ago
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0With the education reform in the early 2001sup00th02sup00 century, some educators who had tremendous impacts on western education suggested four major things02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00With the education reform in the early 2001sup 00th02sup 00 century, some educators who had tremendous impacts on western education suggested four major things02font 02br 02br 00It's OK, but not written in a very stylish manner. It means very little without seeing it in a context. 02br 02br 00Some concerns to be looked at include these.

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00With the education reform in the early 2001sup 00th02sup 00 century, some educators who had tremendous impacts on western education suggested four major things02font 02br 02br 00It's OK, but not written in a very stylish manner.
  • It means very little without seeing it in a context.
  • 02br 02br 00Some concerns to be looked at include these.
  • Was there just one education reform in the 20th.
  • century, or was just one previously selected and specified?
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0Hi,02br
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0I agree wih Clive, one can only go so far with revisions when there is no surrounding context. Nevertheless, I'll make one attempt here:02br
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01font00Certain educators 01font00[it's odd not to name them--can you say 'Certain analysts'?]02font00 who had a tremendous impact on educational reform in the
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