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Justineg Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Is it coorect
I would like to setlle down in your conutry to find another aspect of his profession while puting my knowledge.
I have a two year specialised diploma in accounting what bring me the stictness and responsabilities in my work.
In the 2nd sentences , I wanted to put rigour instead of strictness it is correct also
I have a two year specialised diploma in accounting what bring me the stictness and responsabilities in my work.
In the 2nd sentences , I wanted to put rigour instead of strictness it is correct also
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Hello, Justin - and welcome to English Forums. In the 2nd sentences , I wanted to put rigour instead of strictness it is correct also-- Your sentences have worse problems than that. Please fix the underlined problem areas below and re-post your revised text.
- Hello, Justin - and welcome to English Forums.
- In the 2nd sentences , I wanted to put rigour instead of strictness it is correct also-- Your sentences have worse problems than that.
- Please fix the underlined problem areas below and re-post your revised text.
- Then we will try to improve your presentation.
- I would like to setlle down in your conutry to find another aspect of his profession while puting my knowledge.
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Hello, Justin - and welcome to English Forums.
In the 2nd sentences , I wanted to put rigour instead of strictness it is correct also-- Your sentences have worse problems than that. Please fix the underlined problem areas below and re-post your revised text. Then we will try to improve your presentation.
I would like to setlle down in your conutry t
In the 2nd sentences , I wanted to put rigour instead of strictness it is correct also-- Your sentences have worse problems than that. Please fix the underlined problem areas below and re-post your revised text. Then we will try to improve your presentation.
I would like to setlle down in your conutry t
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I would like to settle down in your country to find another aspect of this profession while putting my knowledge. I have a two-year specialised diploma in accounting what bring me the rigour and responsabilities in my work.
Is it better now, however for bring i don t know if it s correct if i let bring ou brings; and puting or putting?
Can help me more thanks
Is it better now, however for bring i don t know if it s correct if i let bring ou brings; and puting or putting?
Can help me more thanks
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Yes, it was better but still not correct. I suggest:
I would like to take up residency in your country to apply my current knowlege to new aspects of my profession. I hold a two-year Specialized Diploma in Accounting, and I bring rigour and responsibility to all of my work.
I would like to take up residency in your country to apply my current knowlege to new aspects of my profession. I hold a two-year Specialized Diploma in Accounting, and I bring rigour and responsibility to all of my work.
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