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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is it clear the "he" refers to the "lich"?

The lich also convinced Iphegor to command several of the church of Kossuth’s militant orders to join the fight against the undead, and he supplied the priests with magical torch-like weapons to aid them.
  

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cboutin3 The lich also convinced Iphegor to command several of the church of Kossuth’s militant orders to join the fight against the undead, and he also supplied the priests with magical torch-like weapons to aid them. Cut-and-paste works here. You might want to add something at the beginning, like then.

— Philip

  • cboutin3 The lich also convinced Iphegor to command several of the church of Kossuth’s militant orders to join the fight against the undead, and he also supplied the priests with magical torch-like weapons to aid them.
  • Cut-and-paste works here.
  • You might want to add something at the beginning, like then.
  • ) That would take care of confusion
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cboutin3 The lich also convinced Iphegor to command several of the church of Kossuth’s militant orders to join the fight against the undead, and he also supplied the priests with magical torch-like weapons to aid them.
Cut-and-paste works here. You might want to add something at th
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Thanks for your help. Would these sentences work and flow well? Szass Tam is the lich, and Milsantos and Nymia are governors/tharchions.
After she and Aoth provided the five lords with full accounts of the Thayans’ two defeats, Nymia told them that Milsantos Daramos, the tharchion of Thazalhar, was bringing his troops to Pyarados to assist her in combating the undead marauders. Szass Tam infor
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Okay. You might want to change something so you don't have 'utilize' and 'usable' so close together.
Try something like this: he would use any Thayan corpses he could to manufacture....
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Okay great idea, thanks. Is it clear that the "them" in that sentence refers to the "governors' forces"?
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cboutin3Okay great idea, thanks. Is it clear that the "them" in that sentence refers to the "governors' forces"?
It's clear.
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