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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is it clear that the 'him' refers to Tchazzar?
Aoth magically contacted Tchazzar and explained the Brotherhood’s manipulations in attempting to prevent him from launching a war against Tymanther.
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It could be clearer... Since you have two possible persons in the sentence that could be described by the word him, it's better to phrase it in such a way that there isn't any chance of confusion.
- It could be clearer...
- Since you have two possible persons in the sentence that could be described by the word him, it's better to phrase it in such a way that there isn't any chance of confusion.
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It could be clearer... Since you have two possible persons in the sentence that could be described by the word him, it's better to phrase it in such a way that there isn't any chance of confusion.
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