Is it clear that both the 'he' refer to Riverwind?
The chieftain considered Riverwind’s beliefs to be an affront to the tribe and decreed that he could only wed Goldmoon if he found proof of the old gods’ existence.
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It is not absolutely clear, however, it can be figured out from the context.
— Elanguest
It is not absolutely clear, however, it can be figured out from the context.
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Thanks for your help. Do you think I should keep the sentence the way it is or change it to this? The chieftain considered Riverwind’s beliefs to be an affront to the tribe, and decreed that Riverwind could only wed Goldmoon if he found proof of the old gods’ existence.