Is it acceptable to say ‘after the last dance for all’ in the sentence below?
Is it acceptable to say ‘after the last dance for all’ in the sentence below?
There was a promenade on the ground floor of the campus building. After the last dance for all, the winners in the search for the “prom king and queen” were announced.
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The prepositional phrase "for all" doesn't make good sense in the sentence. I'm not sure what it means. I would eliminate it from the sentence.
- The prepositional phrase "for all" doesn't make good sense in the sentence.
- I'm not sure what it means.
- I would eliminate it from the sentence.
- " or At the end of the dances, After all the dances, After the last dance, which included everyone, the winners...
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The prepositional phrase "for all" doesn't make good sense in the sentence. I'm not sure what it means. I would eliminate it from the sentence. Maybe you mean "After all the dances were finished, the winners in the search for..."
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At the end of the dances,
After all the dances,
After the last dance, which included everyone, the winners...
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