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Faisalkhan Posted 14 years ago
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Is it a correct paragraph?

Freelance writer Miyan cannot stop loving writing and reading. His articles always talk to the readers. You would love listening to his articles. In a nutshell, whatever the topic is, he is more like a storyteller than a writer!
  

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I think this is better : Freelance writer Miyan cannot stop himself from loving writing and reading. His articles always talk to the readers. You will love listening to his articles.

  • I think this is better : Freelance writer Miyan cannot stop himself from loving writing and reading.
  • His articles always talk to the readers.
  • You will love listening to his articles.
  • In a nutshell, whatever the topic is, he is more (like) a storyteller than a writer!
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I think this is better :

Freelance writer Miyan cannot stop himself from loving writing and reading. His articles always talk to the readers. You will love listening to his articles. In a nutshell, whatever the topic is, he is more (like) a storyteller than a writer!
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Do I need to mention "(like)"

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You may, if you wish , both are correct .

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