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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is 'instead' placed in the correct spot of the sentence?

Soth used his death magic on Crysania, but she was saved by the intercession of Paladine and fell instead into a deep coma.
  

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cboutin3 Soth used his death magic on Crysania, but she was saved by the intercession of Paladine and fell instead into a deep coma. I'd put "instead" at the end of the sentence.

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  • cboutin3 Soth used his death magic on Crysania, but she was saved by the intercession of Paladine and fell instead into a deep coma.
  • I'd put "instead" at the end of the sentence.
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cboutin3 Soth used his death magic on Crysania, but she was saved by the intercession of Paladine and fell instead into a deep coma.
I'd put "instead" at the end of the sentence.
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It's fine where it is in the original.
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