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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is "in order" a good choice in this sentence?

Catti-brie decided to depart Longsaddle in order to protect the Harpells and convinced one of the elder mages to magically transport her to the small town of Auckney.
  

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Yes, "in order" is a good choice. " Should that be "magicians"?

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  • Yes, "in order" is a good choice.
  • " Should that be "magicians"?
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Yes, "in order" is a good choice. I am wondering what you mean by the word "mages." Should that be "magicians"?
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