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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is "however" a good word choice for these sentences?

Soon thereafter, Crysania traveled to the town of Solace with the kender hero Tasslehoff Burrfoot to get Raistlin’s twin brother, Caramon Majere, to assist her on the journey to the Tower of High Sorcery in Wayreth. However, Crysania did not know that Caramon had fallen into a state of depression since he felt unneeded by anyone, particularly his brother.
  

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It seems a bit odd to me, because I don't really know the particulars. If it is contrary to the situation, it works fine.

— Philip

  • It seems a bit odd to me, because I don't really know the particulars.
  • If it is contrary to the situation, it works fine.
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It seems a bit odd to me, because I don't really know the particulars. If it is contrary to the situation, it works fine.
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Thanks for your help. Do you have any suggestions on how I could better word or structrue the transition between the two sentences?
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