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Eslam ayad Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

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Dear sir or madam,
I am eslam ayad, 19 years old, computer science student at the faculty of computer and information, Zagazig University. Within this letter, I would like to apply for the Google student ambassador program for 2012-2013. I really appreciate this program and think it is perfect to me.
Since I was in high school, I interested in to keep up with new technologies and benefit from it as possible as I can. And I really interested in exploring the new technologies of Google. My skills is lie in my ability to comprehensively read and understanding the situation and act quickly and yet smartly. Communications with people, understanding their needs and providing them with a value preposition which is truly hard to refuse and am will work on this point.
Skills and experiences that I will benefit from this program will contribute to my future career. A terrific benefit of this program is not only to boost change in my future career but also I will have opportunities to meet new people and new ideas. This program will help me to enhance my theoretical knowledge with practical experiences through dealing with Google’s other ambassadors. It can be the cavy for me to achieve my goal; starting small and even totally make it big.
After becoming an ambassador for Google in my faculty, I will help student to recognize and deal with Google’s products and benefit from it as possible as they could. And we will work on make projects through using Google’s tools.
I hope I will be accepted as an applicant and a beneficially of the program. I am confident that I am qualified for this program and I will get everything out of my time at this program.

Yours faithfully
  

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Here are some suggestions: Dear S ir or M adam, I am E slam A yad, 19 years old, a computer science student at the faculty of computer and information, Zagazig University. With this letter, I would like to apply for the Google student ambassador program for 2012-2013. I really appreciate this program and think it is perfect for me.

  • Here are some suggestions: Dear S ir or M adam, I am E slam A yad, 19 years old, a computer science student at the faculty of computer and information, Zagazig University.
  • With this letter, I would like to apply for the Google student ambassador program for 2012-2013.
  • I really appreciate this program and think it is perfect for me.
  • Since I was in high school, I have been interested in to keep ing up with new technologies and benefit ing from them as much possible as I possible can .
  • And I am really interested in exploring the new technologies of Google.
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Here are some suggestions:

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Eslam Ayad, 19 years old, a computer science student at the faculty of computer and information, Zagazig University. With this letter, I would like to apply for the Google student ambassador program for 2012-2013. I really appreciate this program and think it is perfect for me.
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Thank you very much AlpheccaStars Emotion: smile

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