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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Is having when twice awkward?

Is this awkward and not pretty and wrong?

I hate it when I drool when asleep.

Which is correct?

I hate it when I am asleep and I drool.
I hate drooling when asleep.
  

Top answer

I think they're all awkward, but that's just me. I hate it when I drool in my sleep. I hate it when I drool while I am asleep.

— RandomGuy

  • I think they're all awkward, but that's just me.
  • I hate it when I drool in my sleep.
  • I hate it when I drool while I am asleep.
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I think they're all awkward, but that's just me.

I hate it when I drool in my sleep.
I hate it when I drool while I am asleep.
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