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Andy Haciek Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Is everything right here?

Kindly help me out. I am writing this to some one and just want to make sure there is no fault in it.

-My experience with ST has been really good. The assistance has helped me in
refining my CV that includes proper CV layout, presenting the content in appropriate way, (Having avoided or)
avoiding spelling and grammar mistakes. In addition to that I have come to know the right
places to look for jobs and internship. Now I am feeling more confident and positive towards getting a good job. -
  

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Hi Andy, I corrected your letter, as seen below: -My experience with ST has been really good. Their assistance has helped me in refining my CV, including how to properly layout a CV, present the content in appropriate way, and avoid spelling and grammar mistakes. In addition to that I have come to know the right places to look for jobs and internship.

  • Hi Andy, I corrected your letter, as seen below: -My experience with ST has been really good.
  • Their assistance has helped me in refining my CV, including how to properly layout a CV, present the content in appropriate way, and avoid spelling and grammar mistakes.
  • In addition to that I have come to know the right places to look for jobs and internship.
  • Now I am feeling more confident and positive towards getting a good job.
  • - Wishing you success, Aina
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Hi Andy,
I corrected your letter, as seen below:

-My experience with ST has been really good. Their assistance has helped me in
refining my CV, including how to properly layout a CV, present the content in appropriate way, and
avoid spelling and grammar mistakes. In addition to that I have come to know the right
places to look for jobs and internship. Now I am feeling mo

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