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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Is correct? About a movie review
It stars a guy about who no one outside of his family (and hometown) know much about him, and was done for a budget of around $30 million. That combination of elements adds up to one of the best sci-fi films of the decade and one of the most entertaining movies of 2009.
Is correct the grammar teachers? Thanks in advance.
Is correct the grammar teachers? Thanks in advance.
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I'd say, It stars a character who is little known outside his family and hometown. and I'd also break the first sentence into two, since there are two separate thoughts. The film was made with a budget of around $30 million.
- I'd say, It stars a character who is little known outside his family and hometown.
- and I'd also break the first sentence into two, since there are two separate thoughts.
- The film was made with a budget of around $30 million.
- It would sound better to say, This combination of elements...
- but honestly I think it would be better to explain a little bit more about the story, since just a mysterious character + $30 million do not necessarily equal a great movie.
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I'd say,
It stars a character who is little known outside his family and hometown.
and I'd also break the first sentence into two, since there are two separate thoughts.
The film was made with a budget of around $30 million.
It would sound better to say,
This combination of elements...
but honestly I think i
It stars a character who is little known outside his family and hometown.
and I'd also break the first sentence into two, since there are two separate thoughts.
The film was made with a budget of around $30 million.
It would sound better to say,
This combination of elements...
but honestly I think i
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. Thanks teacher.0
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