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The starting point of this project was to image a utopian city in which live together elements referring to a transcendental dimension as a return to the roots and elements focusing to the contemporary. From here began our research which sees us focused on body’s concept, space and their interaction. So we have identified parkour as the function that represent the space. In our tower we included two elements deeply different but at the same time interconnecting. One on side, there is a concrete wall with holds and rocks,  used for the ascent. This part refer as a concept of solidity and fixed space. On the other side, there is the descending part, in which metal floors follow one another in dynamically and lightly.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

There are sufficient grammatical oddities to make it difficult to understand. I hesitate to make any suggestions when I don't understand your ideas. Is this a design for a computer game set in a city?

.The starting point of this project was to image a utopian city in which live together (inversion?) elements referring to a transcendental dimension as a return to (from what?) the roots and elements focusing to the contemporary.
From here began our research (inversion?) which sees (Can research see?) us focused on body’s concept (Can a body conceptualize?) , space and their interaction. (How can a space and a concept interact?) So we have identified parkour as the function (Is parkour a function?) that represent the space. In our tower we included two elements deeply different but at the same time (dynamic elements?) interconnecting. One on side, there is a concrete wall with holds and rocks, used for the ascent. This part refer as (?) a concept of solidity and fixed space. On the other side, there is the descending part, in which metal floors follow one another in dynamically and lightly. (in what?)

Narco · Answer

thank you alphecca stars, it's a metaproject explanation

AlpheccaStars · Answer

narco thank you alphecca stars, it's a metaproject explanation

What is a meta-project? I've heard of metadata, but never a meta-project.

Narco · Answer

The starting point of this project was to image a utopian city in which elements live together referring to a transcendental dimension as a return to the past and elements that are focused to the contemporary.
From here our research began where we focused on theme of the body, space and their interaction. So we have identified parkour like a function that represent the space. In our tower we included two elements deeply different but at the same time interconnecting. One on side, there is a concrete wall with holds and rocks, used for the ascent. This part of the project want to explain the concept of solidity and fixed space. On the other side, there is the descending part, in which metal floors are light and dynamic.

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AlpheccaStars · Answer

Is this something like what you are saying?

The project had its inception when we imagined a utopian city in which its elements live together in a multidimensional space. The transcendental dimension enables elements that are harbingers of the future to travel to (reappear in) the past.

Narco · Answer

yes, i'm happy that someone understood

Narco · Answer

grammatically correct?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

narco grammatically correct?

Which one - yours or mine?
I had to paraphrase yours, because I was only guessing at what you were trying to say.

Narco · Answer

Mine <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/5.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/5.gif' alt='Emotion: wink'/>

AlpheccaStars · Answer

There are still some fundamental grammatical errors.

The starting point of this project was to image a utopian city in which elements live together referring to a transcendental dimension as a return to the past and (here's where I get lost in the weird sentence structure) elements that are focused to the contemporary.
From here our research began where we focused on theme of the human (?) body, space and their interaction. So we have identified parkour like a function that represent (subject-verb mismatch; do you mean "defines"?) the space. In our tower we included two elements deeply different but at the same time interconnecting. One on side, there is a concrete wall with holds and rocks, used for the ascent. This part of the project want (subject-verb mismatch; Does a part explain something?) to explain the concept of solidity and fixed space. On the other side, there is the (you previously used the indefinite article.) descending part, in which the metal floors are light and dynamic.

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