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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
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Is "by" correct in this context?

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I am curious if "by" is correct in this context?
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The facial skin elasticity increases by 50%, visible wrinkles are reduced by 66%, skin moisture level increases by 90%, skin becomes more elastic by 45%, due to stimulation of blood microcirculation the provision of skin with essential nutrients increases by 91%.

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Due to increased micro-circulation, facial skin elasticity increases by 50%, body skin elasticity by 45%, skin moisture levels by 90%, and the provision of essential nutrients to the skin increases by 91% while visible wrinkles are reduced by 66%.

  • Due to increased micro-circulation, facial skin elasticity increases by 50%, body skin elasticity by 45%, skin moisture levels by 90%, and the provision of essential nutrients to the skin increases by 91% while visible wrinkles are reduced by 66%.
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Due to increased micro-circulation, facial skin elasticity increases by 50%, body skin elasticity by 45%, skin moisture levels by 90%, and the provision of essential nutrients to the skin increases by 91% while visible wrinkles are reduced by 66%.

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